Phuong โฏ
671 reviews8,030 followers
โ 2.4 stars What this book has: ๐ซ a heroine in a mafia setting with a brain What this book also has: ๐ 3rd POV Not to compliment myself, but I think I did a good job of summarizing The Predator. If something is missing from that list, my DM's are wide open for suggestions. ๐ Morana Vitalio: Stop staring. I wanted to say that reading this book was such a great experience, but just looking at the rating, that would be a big lie. It was painful af. The first 40% of this book were hands down a solid 1.5 stars rating from me. The monlogues, the eye starring, the silence I hated everything about it. It was so mind-numbing. The voices in my f*cking head talked more than the characters in this whole book. ๐ญ๐ Tristan had the potential to be up there with all the great heroes. Is there anything this man can't do? But due to the writing I couldn't care enough about him. Same applies for Morana. For the first 40% I was just begging for someone to end my misery (I'm dramatic ik just let me ๐คก๐ค) that by the time when something interesting between the main character happened I was like Tristan f*cking Morana in the restroom while her father's men are standing behind the door calling out to her? Yeah, even I can admit that scene was something. If I had to choose my favorite scenes from this book, then it probably that one or the Tristan & Morana rain kiss in the last chapter. That were the scenes were I was mourning this couple potential, cause they could have slapped so hard and end all other mafia couples, but nah sorry missed that mark with all the staring instead of talking. There was actually an interesting flashback scene between Tristan and Morana that I somewhat enjoyed, until I got to the point where it was revealed why Tristan hates Morana that much. And oh boy.. oh hell. Here is my reaction: Conclusion The first half was pretty much a disaster, the second half was somehow better, but I still don't care enough. Usually I'm all about the side characters, but even Dante and Amara didn't do anything for me, because I'm already dreading how the writing is going to be ๐ I'm still going to read the next books, but for now I need a break. ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ #1 The Predator โ 2.4 stars
๐ซ a heroine who is not just waiting for her father to arrrange a marriage for her
๐ซ a dark hair, blue eyed hero with BDE
๐ซ a hero who doesn't speak much
๐ซ enemies-to-lovers
๐ endless monologues
๐ staring so MUCH STARING ๐๐๐
๐ SILENCE
๐ guns and violence
๐ did I already mentioned staring? if not, yeah, a lot of staring ๐๐๐
๐ blue eyes
๐ a motorcycle
๐ the words "TRISTAN CAINE" (219 times to be exact)
๐ a voice of whiskey and sin (that was not used nearly enough)
๐ I wanna do this review for The Predator justice so I gotta mention once again the eye staring contest Tristan and Morana had going on throughout this whole book ๐๐๐
๐ no talk, only stares ๐๐๐
A staredown. She didn't remove her eyes from his, and he didn't remove his from hers, neither willing to look away first.
Basically this whole book in a nutshell:
Tristan Caine: No.
"Next time, I'm going to see how loud you can scream, Ms. Vitalio. I'm going to make you so sore you won't know if it's from the screaming or the f*cking."
Ugh. See? R.I.P. the potential of that man. I'm mourning. Honestly, I wish I could love him more, but the way this book was written destroyed everything and was so boring. ๏ฟฝ๏ฟฝ๏ฟฝ๏ฟฝ
He stilled even more, impossibly.
She stilled even more, reflexively.
The air between them stilled, dangerously.
I really wanted to put a sweet TristanMorana quote here, but all my highlights are 90% from them staring at each other across the room while crickets are chirping in the background or 10% f*cking. That's it. ๐ฌ
DARK VERSE SERIES
#2 The Reaper โ tbr
#3 The Emperor โ tbr
#4 The Finisher โ tbr
#5 The Annihilator โ tbr
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- 2-stars-wanna-scratch-my-eyes-out alpha-jealous-possessive-hero books-read-in-2021
Ayman
263 reviews112k followers
i read this in one sitting and now iโm a changed woman. you donโt know what enemies to even more enemies to enemies with benefits to enemies that still arenโt lovers is until you read this masterpiece. i read this in less that 24hrs and now my skin is glowing. this sh*t changed my hair color. the slow burn, longing, and copious amounts of staring made me feel like someone pushed me onto incoming traffic. and i loved every bit of it. i finished it and suddenly a cliff appeared in front of me. Tristian and Morana are two characters that iโm deadly afraid of yet two characters iโd let take me any which way. their tension made me want to jump off the golden gate bridge, throw a toaster into a bath tub, and jump into it. my body folded like an origami with that bathroom and shower scene. anyways canโt wait to read the sequel next.
Ali Goodwin
251 reviews33.5k followers
I did not expect to love this book as much as I did. This is one of my first mafia romances and I'm obsessed. The characters are *actual* enemies to lovers which I LOVE. The first chapter literally starts with Morana trying to kill Tristan. *swoon*๐
BUT I also love that it's not a toxic or morally grey romance. This book is definitely a dark romance because the mafia world is dark but Tristan and Morana have such good hearts.
shanayaa
104 reviews176 followers
โณ 4/5 stars "Don't you know not to run away from predators, sweetheart? We like the hunt" Well, i have had this series for some time now but it never really piqued my interest but after one of my good friend spoke so highly of it i finally decided to give it go and let me tell u it didn't disappoint. Although the writing was typically lousy and boring but i can ignore it because the characters were soo good and the storyline was excellently executed. The plot was pretty interesting as well and kept me wanting to read it more and more. So in this captivating narrative, we're immersed in the world of two influential families, the Vitalios and the Maronis. Morana Vitalio, Gabriel Vitalio's daughter, is a computer expert who has created some codes, which found in the wrong hands could cause a war between the two families. Enter Tristan Caine, also known as 'The Predator,' a protege of Lorenzo Maroni. As Morana and Tristan uncover the truth behind the theft, they realize they're pawns in a larger game. Together, they form an unlikely alliance to retrieve the stolen codes and prevent potential harm to both of the families. Although the pacing of book was very good and kept me intrested because something was happening all the time but the writing was lousy, bland and repetitive, there were countless mentions of his whiskey and sin voice and also his blue eyes and with every single mention i wanted to throw my book because it became way too much like once or twice would've been tolerable but it was literally more than twenty times and this might be the only reason im not rating it five stars because good writing literally matters to me the most. This book is considered dark romance although i couldn't feel the romance at all but man the sexual tension between them was off the charts ngl i could literally feel it through the pages. โฐโโค Tristan Caine This guy embodied all the classic traits of a dark romance lead: mysterious, brooding, and haunted by a troubled past. As I delved into his backstory, I couldn't help but feel a wave of sympathy wash over me. His struggles and hardships gave context to his guarded demeanor and quiet disposition. It became clear why he was so hesitant to trust or open up to others. In the end, I found myself rooting for him to find the closure and peace he so rightfully deserves. "They called him the predator. His reputation preceded him. He rarely went on hunt but when he did, it was over.โ โฐโโค Morana Vitalio Morana stands out as one of the most memorable female leads I've come across. She embodies beauty, intelligence, and a fierce determination that commands respect. What truly captured my attention were her sharp wit and fearless demeanorโher snarky comments added a delightful flair to her character. However, there were moments when her reactions felt a bit exaggerated, especially when she couldn't resist his intense gaze. Despite this, her intelligence and unwavering resolve remained admirable throughout the story. Morana's upbringing in a mafia family shaped her into a strong and independent woman from the start. Despite being surrounded by dangerous men, she fiercely fought for her freedomโa refreshing departure from the typical portrayal of women in mafia romances as submissive and doormat types. "She'd been raised around sharks. And sheโd learned not to bleed" Despite being constantly surrounded by people, Morana experienced deep loneliness, with no one truly there for her when she needed support the most. It was heartbreaking to see her endure so much hardship when she deserved nothing but love and understanding. "She cried because she had no one to give her a shoulder and hold her as she cried, because she had to wrap her arms around herselfโ What actually disgusted me the most was morana's sh*tty father istg that man was such a f*cked up piece of sh*t. He basically always prostituted and humiliated his own daughter in front of other men like I can't imagine a dad not snapping the neck of the man who tried to touch his daughter in a wrong way but this man he literally sat there when some other man tried to touch his own daughter and then proceeded to be an ass about it and let's not even forget about him f*cking throwing her down the stairs just because he was angry istg she could've died but he gave no f*cks about her, istg such a terrible piece of sh*t. It's undeniable that this book was a captivating read from start to finish, keeping me hooked with every turn of the page. And let's talk about that iconic rain scene! Despite not fully understanding the hype beforehand, experiencing it firsthand had me completely swept away. It was steamy and intense in all the right ways, leaving me absolutely hooked. "He devoured her in the rain, with his gun beneath her jaw." ยฐหโด "Overall, if you're craving a gripping read that will captivate you from start to finish, look no further. Dive into this book and let yourself get lost in its compelling storyline. Enjoyy!!" ๐ เฑจเง QUOTES โงหยฐ. โ "No one else gets to kill you, Ms Vitalio, the last face you see before you die will be mine. When it comes to death, you're mine." โ "Death isn't the main course, sweetheart. It's the dessert. Never make the mistake of thinking you know me. It might just prove to be your lastโ โ "The man who'd claimed her death had given her a glimpse of life by doing something he probably didn't even realize he'd done. In that moment, the enemy had done what no one had ever even tried to do for her. He had made her feel a little less lonely." โ "We've been honest so far, Ms. Vitalio. I'll be honest now. I despise you but I want you. f*ck it, I do. And I want you out of my system." โ "One day, I'm going to carve your heart out and keep it as a souvenir. I promise.โ -หหโโโโโ ๊ฐ๐ทโน เฃช pre-read review แฏแกฃ๐ญฉ Well, this book have been side-eyeing me from my shelf since ages and i think it's finally the time to pick it up, soo hope it delivers!!!! ๐๐
โโNever make the mistake of thinking you scare me." โIt might be your last"
"You assume I have a heart, wildcat.โ
- all-time-faves mmc-s-that-had-me-on-my-knees
Iqra
512 reviews4,363 followers
OMG OMG THAT LAST CHAPTER WAS BOMB. Itโs been a MINUTE since I stayed up till 3 am to read a book. ๐๐จ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ญ๐๐ง๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง ๐ฐ๐๐ฌ ๐
๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐. It gave me EVERYTHING I had no idea was missing from my life. I can see myself rereading this every month or some sh*t. Like it was that good. ๐๐ก ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐ ๐จ๐ ๐โ๐ฏ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ง๐ ๐๐ง๐จ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ ๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ข๐๐ฌ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ ๐๐ญ ๐จ๐๐ฌ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐๐ ๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ซ. There were so many times when I couldnโt predict what the characters would do and thatโs something I truly ADORE. Okay, I have to say that it was the third pov that kinda made me waver a little since I just got disconnected sometimes when there were too many she said, he said. Also there wasnโt much โจromanceโจ (and when I say romance I mean emotional connection) but thatโs part of the story and hopefully Iโll get that in the next book. And the writing was sometimes corny but whatever bc ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐
๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๏ฟฝ๏ฟฝ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐. ๐๐จ๐ซ๐๐ง๐ was chef's kiss. ๐๐ฒ๐ฟ ๐ฐ๐ต๐ฎ๐ฟ๐ฎ๐ฐ๐๐ฒ๐ฟ ๐๐ฎ๐ ๐๐ผ ๐บ๐ฎ๐๐๐ฟ๐ฒ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ ๐๐ผ ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ณ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐๐ต๐ถ๐ป๐ด. She gave herself time to process and basically gave herself interventions lmao. ๐๐ก๐ ๐ฐ๐๐ฌ ๐ง๐จ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ง๐จ๐ฒ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐. I loved her the entire time and it's so hard to find a book where I love the FMCS too. ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ง was a tough nut to crack and srsly Iโve still not got him figured out. ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐
๐๐๐๐ He had more personality in the texts than IRL bro he never even spoke much ๐ฉ ๐๐ฅ๐ฌ๐จ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐? Each character was so FIIIINEEEE. ๐ง๐ฟ๐ถ๐๐๐ฎ๐ป๐ ๐ผ๐ฟ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฎ ๐๐ฒ๐ฟ๐ฒ ๐๐ผ ๐ต๐ผ๐ ๐ถ๐ป ๐บ๐ ๐ต๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ฑ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐๐ต๐ฒ๐โ๐ฟ๐ฒ ๐ด๐ผ๐ป๐ป๐ฎ ๐ฏ๐ฒ ๐ผ๐ป๐ฒ ๐ผ๐ณ ๐บ๐ ๐๐ผ๐ฝ ๐๐ฒ๐ป ๐ฐ๐ผ๐๐ฝ๐น๐ฒ๐ ๐ณ๐ผ๐ฟ ๐๐๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฒ๐ฒ ๐
pls, what is in their water bc ๐๐๐๐๐??!! ๐ ๐ฌ๐๐จ ๐จ๐๐ข๐ฅ๐ก๐ฎ ๐จ๐๐ฃ๐ฉ ๐๐ฃ๐ฉ๐ค ๐๐ฃ๐ค๐ฉ๐๐๐ง ๐๐๐ข๐๐ฃ๐จ๐๐ค๐ฃ. ๐๐
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๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐!! ๐ฆ๐ถ๐ฑ๐ฒ ๐ป๐ผ๐๐ฒ: ๐ฆ๐ผ๐ป๐ด๐: ๐ง ๐๐ฎ๐ ๐ค๐๐ผ๐๐ฒ๐: "๐ฌ๐ผ๐ ๐๐๐ถ๐๐ฐ๐ต ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐๐ผ๐ ๐ฑ๐ถ๐ฒ." "๐ช๐ฒ ๐๐ผ๐ปโ๐ ๐ต๐๐ฟ๐ ๐๐ผ๐! ๐ช๐ฒ ๐ท๐๐๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ป๐ ๐๐ผ ๐๐ฎ๐น๐ธ!" "๐ ๐ฝ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ณ๐ฒ๐ฟ ๐๐ผ๐ ๐ฏ๐น๐ผ๐ป๐ฑ๐ฒ." "๐ก๐๐ต-๐๐ต. ๐ฌ๐ผ๐ ๐บ๐ผ๐๐ฒ ๐ฎ๐ป ๐ถ๐ป๐ฐ๐ต ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐๐ผ๐,๐น๐น ๐ด๐ผ ๐ฏ๐ฎ๐ฐ๐ธ ๐๐ถ๐๐ต ๐ฎ ๐๐ฐ๐ฎ๐ฟ." โEven as she steadied herself, ๐๐จ๐ซ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐๐ฅ๐ญ ๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ก๐๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐ฅ๐ข๐ฉ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐๐ค ๐จ๐ ๐ก๐๐ซ ๐ง๐๐๐ค, ๐๐ฎ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ก๐๐ซ ๐ง๐๐ฉ๐ ๐๐ฌ ๐ก๐ ๐ฉ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐๐ ๐ก๐๐ซ ๐๐๐๐ค ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฎ๐ฉ๐ซ๐ข๐ ๐ก๐ญ, ๐ฌ๐๐ฉ๐ ๐ฃ๐ค๐ฉ๐๐๐ฃ๐ ๐๐ช๐ฉ ๐๐๐จ ๐๐ค๐ก๐ ๐ค๐ฃ ๐๐๐ง ๐ฃ๐๐๐ .โ ๐๐ข๐ฌ ๐ง๐จ๐ฌ๐ ๐ง๐ฎ๐ณ๐ณ๐ฅ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ข๐ง๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ก๐๐ซ ๐ก๐๐๐, ๐ข๐ง๐ก๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐๐๐๐ฉ๐ฅ๐ฒ. โ๐ ๐ฑ๐ผ๐ปโ๐ ๐ธ๐ป๐ผ๐ ๐๐ต๐ฒ๐๐ต๐ฒ๐ฟ ๐๐ผ ๐๐ป๐ฎ๐ฝ ๐๐ผ๐๐ฟ ๐ป๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ธ ๐ผ๐ฟ ๐ณ๐๐ฐ๐ธ ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐น๐ถ๐ณ๐ฒ ๐ผ๐๐ ๐ผ๐ณ ๐๐ผ๐,โ โ๐๐ป๐ฑ ๐ฎ๐ณ๐๐ฒ๐ฟ ๐ฎ ๐ฝ๐ผ๐ถ๐ป๐, ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐๐ฐ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐บ๐ ๐ท๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ผ๐ฝ๐ฝ๐ฒ๐ฑ.โ ๐๐ผ๐ผ๐ธ๐ ๐๐ถ๐๐ต ๐๐ถ๐บ๐ถ๐น๐ฎ๐ฟ ๐๐ถ๐ฏ๐ฒ๐: *** IโVE HAD ENOUGH OF EVERYONE TEASING ME WITH THIS SERIES SOโฆ itโs finally happening. *** Iโm seeing this EVERYWHERE on my feed!! Should I or should I??
It came to a point where I wanted to start the book again just so I could relive their first encounter forever. Bc my god, I WAS NOT EXPECTING IT. AT ALL.
๐ ๐ฒ ๐ฝ๐ฎ๐๐ถ๐ป๐ด ๐ฎ๐๐๐ฒ๐ป๐๐ถ๐ผ๐ป ๐๐ผ ๐ฎ๐น๐น ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐ฝ๐น๐ผ๐ ๐ฝ๐ผ๐ถ๐ป๐๐ ๐ฎ๐ ๐ถ๐ณ ๐โ๐บ ๐ด๐ฒ๐๐๐ถ๐ป๐ด ๐ฎ ๐๐ฎ๐ด๐ฒ ๐ณ๐ผ๐ฟ ๐ถ๏ฟฝ๏ฟฝ๏ฟฝ๏ฟฝ ๐
Ngl him staring had me a little like okay dude LMFAO ๐ but then I found out why and I was like damn okay I'll allow it.
๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ฆ๐๐ซ๐ ๐ฐ๐๐ฌ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ญ๐๐ซ๐๐ฅ ๐๐๐๐ฎ๐ญ๐ฒ ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐ฌ๐จ๐ง๐ข๐๐ข๐๐. Her backstory? Ugh, I wanted to cry. I love her sm.
Best believe Iโm licking those DanteAmara crumbs off the table. ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐! I canโt wait for sh*t to hit the fan with them sksjdkdhk
Russian roulette - Rihanna
Devil in a dress - Rhea Raj
Wish I never - kehlani
Iโm yours - Isabel LaRosa
Proud - SoMo
Bite - EMM
Villain - Julia Wolf
Talking in your sleep - DREAMDNVR
Down - Simon ft. Trella
Man's world - Nova Miller
Nights - Adrian Daniel
Peachy - EMM
Antihero - AViVa
Body - purpleheart ft. Adrian Daniel
Hate you but I donโt - Sophia Gripari
โฆ"๐๐ฃ๐ฉ๐๐ง๐๐จ๐ฉ๐๐ฃ๐," he remarked evenly,
~SJSVEUKENSKSN IM SCREAMINGGG
๐๐๐๐ก, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐ก๐ ๐ฐ๐๐ฌ ๐ ๐ฆ๐จ๐ง๐ค๐๐ฒโ๐ฌ ๐ฎ๐ง๐๐ฅ๐.
~Lmfaoo ๐
"๐ ๐ฝ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ณ๐ฒ๐ฟ ๐๐ผ๐ ๐ด๐ผ๐ป๐ฒ."
~SCREAMMMM
He stilled, his gaze intensifying. "๐๐ป๐ฑ ๐๐ผ๐ ๐ฐ๐ฎ๐น๐น ๐บ๐ฒ ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐ผ๐ป๐ฒ ๐๐ถ๐๐ต ๐ฑ๐ฒ๐น๐๐๐ถ๐ผ๐ป๐."
~HAHAHHAHA I'M CACKLING.
~THIS ugh the neck holding just makes me go feral
"๐ ๐ฉ๐ค๐ก๐ ๐ฎ๐ค๐ช ๐ฌ๐ ๐๐๐ซ๐ ๐ช๐ฃ๐๐๐ฃ๐๐จ๐๐๐ ๐๐ช๐จ๐๐ฃ๐๐จ๐จ."
~ help. pls.
~THE LATTER PLS TY
~pls stop bc this sh*t is hurting me
The devils night series - Penelope Douglas
- 5-star-gems book-supremacy can-reread-over-and-over
kendyl สโกโษ (bad slump)
181 reviews3,113 followers
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August 29, 2024โฅ08/27/24
the 2 month slump is killing me...this series needs to change my life๐ญa couple weeks ago, my bestie vee told me i remind her of morana and that has not left my mind๐โโ๏ธ
shei แฆ
210 reviews931 followers
โโ 4 โฐ stars. โDon't you know not to run away from predators, sweetheart? We like the huntโ ใปโฅใป Mood of the book: OK OK OK OKKKKKKK!!! JUMPS EXCITELY!!! Before starting I must clarify that I am pleasantly surprised with this book, I did not have many expectations because it was a dark romance, but it has completely exceeded them, the plot has kept me super interested and wanting to read more and more, yesterday I had to stop myself because It was 4 in the morning and I had 2 chapters left but my eyes were literally closing. I must also say that the 4โฐ stars are subjective, I think that objectively the book may deserve 3.5โฐ , but I had such a good time and it got me out of a slump!! So, f*ck it and 4โฐ stars for this book. Now I will talk a little about romance and smut, if you are not comfortable with this, you can skip to the characters area, lets be responsible readers. The romance did not convince me much, it seemed to me that there was more sexual tension than anything else, it is true that, after understanding certain things towards the end of the book, Tristan's behavior can be understood a little more, but the Morana's is a bit... weird lmao. He basically dedicated himself to observing her, the whole book was a staring competition, I'm worried about his vision, should I give Tristan some glasses? โShe'd been raised around sharks. And sheโd learned not to bleedโ โShe cried because she had no one to give her a shoulder and hold her as she cried, because she had to wrap her arms around herselfโ โI don't think anyone can handle you. โNot if you donโt want to be handledโ ๐ธโ๐ฃ๐ป๐ฒ๐ผ๐ฝ๐ช๐ท ๐๐ช๐ฒ๐ท๐ฎโ๐ธ He must have had 20 dialogues during the entire book, butโฆ mmm well! He stares a lot!! Ok ok poor Tristan, let's stop bullying him. He is a very mysterious character, you never know what he is thinking or what his next move is going to be. he has the traumatized vibe and in some parts I really felt sorry and sad for him, he is also very lonely. He deserves a hug. โThey called him the predator. His reputation preceded him. He rarely went on hunt but when he did, it was over.โ โDamn it, the man was a book of blank pages written in invisible ink that she had no idea how to discoverโ ๐ธโ๐๐ช๐ท๐ฝ๐ฎ ๐๐ช๐ป๐ธ๐ท๐ฒโ๐ธ We didn't get much of him but I'm so excited for that!! I can't say a lot about him, but I really really liked him!! ๐ธโ๐๐ถ๐ช๐ป๐ช ๐ก๐ธ๐ผ๐ผ๐ฒโ๐ธMY BABY. She was truly a friend to both Morana and Tristan and she deserves the world.
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: ฬฬโ Sweet Little Lies by Bรผlow โโโฆโเผป๐น๐ต๐ธ๐ฝเผบโโฆโโโ
We follow two families, the Vitalio's and the Maroni's, our female main character, Morana Vitalio, Gabriel Vitalio's daughter, is a computer expert and has created some codes, which found in the wrong hands could cause a war between the two families. Those codes are stolen, when Morana tracks them, they lead him to Tristan Caine, also known as โThe Predatorโ, Lorenzo Maroni's protege. But they both quickly realize that someone is trying to frame Tristan unfairly and they will be forced to team up. โโโฆโเผป๐น๐ช๐ฌ๐ฎ ๐ช๐ท๐ญ ๐๐ป๐ฒ๐ฝ๐ฒ๐ท๐ฐเผบโโฆโโโ
The pacing of the book is very good, it's fast, things are happening almost all the time and it keeps you 100% interested in what will happen next. Now, the writing, although it is simple and easy, it did seem somewhat repetitive and erratic, but I can understand it since, being from Morana's point of view, her mind works like that. BUT, I WANTED TO THROW THE KINDLE EVERY TIME HE REPEATED โWISKHEY AND SIN.โ GIRL. WE GOT IT THE FIRST 50 TIMES, NO NEED FOR A 51.
About the smut, i found it.. weirdly hot? LMAO. Like I didn't even know how to feel about it half of the time, since he said things like โI don't know whether to snap your neck or f*ck the life out of youโ AND I WAS LIKE SIR??? โโโฆโเผป๐ฌ๐ฑ๐ช๐ป๐ช๐ฌ๐ฝ๐ฎ๐ป๐ผเผบโโฆโโโ
๐ธโ๐๐ธ๐ป๐ช๐ท๐ช ๐ฅ๐ฒ๐ฝ๐ช๐ต๐ฒ๐ธโ๐ธ She is a total badass, a strong and independent woman from beginning to end, who has had to grow up surrounded by horrors and has still managed to be so amazing. She is snarky as f*ck and doesn't take anyone's sh*t, but she is very lonely. DID I MENTION SHE IS SO f*ckING INTELLIGENT?? Cleans intense drooling. I really loved her.
โIn another life, in another world, she could actually have been friends with Amara. But she wasn't in another life or in another world. This was her reality. And her reality was alone.โ
I will definitely continue with the series, especially because the plot is super interesting, I don't know if I will venture into more dark romance for now but if you have any good recs that will not traumatize me, let me know!! I hope to read The Reaper very soon!!
โโโฆโเผป๐บ๐พ๐ธ๐ฝ๐ฎ๐ผ ๐ ๐ฎ๐ท๐ณ๐ธ๐๐ฎ๐ญเผบโโฆโโโ
โI prefer you blondeโ
โ--Death isn't the main course, sweetheart. It's the dessert. Never make the mistake of thinking you know me. It might just prove to be your lastโ โโNever make the mistake of thinking you scare me. โIt might be your lastโ
โOne would think that people with too much red on their lives would avoid that color. Instead, they seemed to bask in it.โ
โNo one else gets to kill you, Ms Vitalio, the last face you see before you die will be mine. When it comes to death, you're mine.
โIn that moment, the man who'd claimed her death had given her a glimpse of life by doing something he probably didn't even realize he'd done.โ
โJust because sheโd lost everything known to her didnโt mean she couldnโt find something beautiful in the unknown.โ
I want to comment on a couple of things with spoilers, read at your own risk:
Ok, Tristan's story was super sad, my eyes were full of tears when I read his point of view when he was 8 years old, the love he had for his sister, life is so unfair I swear to god. He was just a little boy, and he should have been helped, not isolated. AAAA PAIN!!!
Morana's father really disgusts me, the way he basically prostituted and humiliated his daughter? Immediate castration. And let's not even talk about when he threw her down the stairs.
The rain scene at the end was super intense, THEY FINALLY KISSED, I WAS SCREAMING. He made a decision and I need the second book to discover who the f*ck stole the codes and what the f*ck is happening, AND WHO IS THE REAPER??? So many unanswered questions.
END OF SPOILERS.
Thank you so much if you read until here. Thank you siff, for doing such an amazing review that convinced me to read this, I love you so much.
Dark Verse series:
โฐโโค The Reaper, 4.5โฐ stars.
โฐโโค The Emperor, 4.5โฐ stars.
โฐโโค The Finisher, 4โฐ stars.
โฐโโคThe Annihilator , 3โฐ stars.
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nov 2: letโs read our first dark romance wish me luck ๐ซถ๐ผ๐ฅน
Lilyya โก
433 reviews2,613 followers
thereโs just something about men who donโt talk that is ๐ซฆ
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bismillah..
SK
476 reviews7,472 followers
While an entertaining and binge worthy read, it had some flaws which I can't overlook, as they made a direct impact on my enjoyment levels. โ
What I liked- 1. Romance- The chemistry between Tristan and Morana is so good. I liked how it wasn't insta lovey and it gradually intensified and developed. The two had such good moments together, I was giggling and blushing. The spice was hot. 2. Characters- Tristan and his mysterious persona kept me engaged. I wanted to find out the reason for his hate and I was not disappointed. I loved how he carried himself, the man exudes power and he knows it. Morana was interesting, I liked her complexities with her father. But at the same time, she was dumb af for someone who's supposed to be smart. 3. First half- The thing about codes was an interesting storyline and to see it get abandoned so quickly in the second half was a buzzkill. 4. Amara and Dante- Look, I liked Tristan and Morana but I know for a fact I'll love Amara and Dante more. In the few scenes they have together, there's already far more chemistry between them and I know it's gonna be angsty. I need more of them. 5. That kiss in the rain- Hello?? I swooned. โWhat I didn't like- 1. Second half- The execution of the plot became messy and weak. It wasn't as enjoyable as the first half. It was underwhelming and seemed like the codes were forgotten altogether. 2. His blue eyes. Magnificent blue. Striking blue. Fierce blue eyes. x100 times. 3. His whiskey and sin voice. x2000 times. Am sorry but I can't stand repetition. I got the first ten thousand times. Am invested in the story and the world created so will continue with the series. ~โข~โข~
Am finally in the mood for this. LET'S GOOOO!!
- dark-romance
Ri โก
388 reviews1,284 followers
"Don't you know not to run away from predators, sweetheart? We like the hunt." OMG OMG OMG!!! what was that!! The ending and the last few chapters ๐ This book is just so good ๐ฉ๐ฅ It literally had me screaming, giggling, and crying in the ending chapters. It has angst, staring, hatred, tension, attraction, mystery and a very heartbreaking past. This is exactly how Enemies to Lovers books are suppose to be written. The starting was amazing, Morana planning to kill Tristan in his own house ๐
and the ending was painful ๐ญ The book is written in third pov but it was really easy for me adapt to it. The story was fast paced but also a little slow I don't know how to explain that. I love RuNyx's beatiful and exquisite writing and the third pov brings more life to this book. Its dark and gore. But I am a sucker for dark romances. So here I am ๐ It was perfect although there were long narrations and less dialogue but I get that in the end why Tristan speak so less to everyone. Its because of his past and how those people treated him when he was young. He was traumatised. Ahhh those people๐ I want to kill them๐ค๐ช And yess there is lots of staring... like literally lots and lots of staring ๐๐ and it is the only thing that bothered me in this book. They both just couldn't keep their eyes away from each other. It was good in the start because it made all the tension between them looks hot but then sometimes it was just too much. But still the sexual tension between Tristan and Morana were hot โค๏ธโ๐ฅ โฆ Tristan "The Predator" Caine Also Tristan has more personality when he is speaking to Morana on texts then he is speaking with her face to face. (It was kinda relatable though ๐คฃ) โฆ Morana Vitalio "The nerdy IT girl" โฆ Dante Maroni: Have I told you that This Man IS A f*cking Gentleman. I can't wait to read his book. And the way he talks is just๐ค๐คญ โฆ Amara: she is a friend in need, always ready to be there for you when you need her. She is so sweet. I love her. And I know her past will shatter my heart into million pieces ๐ Also the tension between Dante and Amara was delicious. I know their book is gonna be amazing and heartbreaking โ Tristan and Morana's relationship And that KISS IN THE RAIN ๐ญ๐ค๐ THE ENDING Don't talk me to me about that ๐ญ๐ I am still in Pain. LOTS OF PAIN. For Tristan, for Morana and what they both had to deal with at such a young age ๐ญ They both deserve all the happiness in this world and I will do anything to protect my precious beautiful idiots ๐ญ๐ โ Favourite Quotes โ โธ "We've been honest so far, Ms. Vitalio," he murmured. "I'll be honest now. I despise you but I want you. f*ck it, I do. And I want you out of my system." โธ "Apparently, you're not out of my system, Ms. Vitalio." โธ "No one else gets to kill you, Ms. Vitalio," he spoke quietly. "The last face you see before you die will be mine. When it comes to death, you're mine." โธ "The man who'd claimed her death had given her a glimpse of life by doing something he probably didn't even realize he'd done. โธ "I don't want to fix him. I want to fix me. And he's the only thing that seems to be working." โธ "He kissed her โ without his tongue, without his hands, without his body. Just his lips โ soft, firm, present โ on hers. It was the most beautiful kiss she could have ever dreamed of, the most untainted sheโd ever imagined from him, with a softness sheโd not thought him capable of. With his intensity, with his blazing eyes, the silent promises had been of devouring. This wasnโt devouring. This was savoring." I really can't wait to read more of this series and to unravel all the mystery!
He had been through hell. Everyone around him thought he was a monster but they never really thought that he was just a small boy, an innocent boy, who was just trying to protect someone. It was hard when I was reading about his past. I was a sobbing mess while reading that chapter. He deserves everything. He deserves Morana because she is the only one who makes him feel alive, when he had been dead inside for over twenty years. He deserves Dante and Amara because they are the only family he has. I love him sm. I just wish he gets his closure and the love he deserves. I want Morana and Tristan to be happy and in love. He is the king of silent kings and those who thinks he is not attractive just because he doesn't speak much I am ready to fight them ๐คบ
AND TRISTAN CAINE IS AN AMAZING COOK!? CAN THIS MAN GET ANY MORE PERFECT ๐คค๐ฅ
omg she is just amazing. She is intelligent, passionate, strong, fierce and independent. I love her so much. All her life she just wanted her freedom and love and a few friends. I don't know how horribly her father treated her that she is even scared of making friends. But I am glad she found Amara, Dante and Tristan. Even though they are her father's enemy yet they all protected her and made her feel safe and happy.
They both have such an electric chemistry ๐ฅAnd the way they both are so hot and scumpdiddlyumptious. Their first encounter was iconic. Morana Vitalio trying to kill 'The Predator' with a knife at his throat ๐งโโ๏ธ I knew they are going to be my favourite from that moment. The enemies to lovers trope, the tension, the staring everything was amazing and I loved it.
In that moment, the enemy had done what no one had ever even tried to do for her.
He had made her feel a little less lonely."
- 2023-books contemporary-romance dark
Tonyaหยฐ
83 reviews199 followers
โฆโฆ4.25 (๐๐
โ๐พ๐๐๐ ๐ป๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐พ๐๐) เชโโด This book f**ked me up in all the best possible ways. I didnโt know mafia romance was for me until I read this book. It ripped my heart out, chewed it up, and spit it right back at me. As a newbie to this whole mafia dark romance thing, I thought it was just going to be some smut after smut, but it was nothing like that; I couldn't put it down, even if I'd tried. It tore my heart out, devoured it, and left it dry ass clean. When I read the first chapter and saw the knife to the throat trope that I love so much, that when I knew that there was no turning back, เชโโด Tristen A predator with a bleeding heartโthat's how I'd describe Tristen Caine. This MF did not even talk, just watching everything like a damn hawk, which was sexy but also creepy. At first glance, it's like he's got no soul, just a ruthless killer lurking behind those dark eyes. But the thing is, the guy's got a heart after all, and it's for her. Her only๐ค. Under that icy exterior, there's a heart that's been shattered into a million pieces, and it's only when he looks at her that it starts to beat again.๐ฅนโค๏ธโ๐ฉนalso my man can cook! likeeee I was not expecting that เชโโดMorana She is my idol๐ค; she is basically my spirit animal. She's got skills in computers that are downright wicked. She's like a version of me, except about a million times cooler and smarter. Morana is the type of woman who knows what she wants and goes after it, no matter what obstacles stand in her way. She's a total role model for me. She is smart, strong, and doesnโt take sh*t from anyone. She got that killer instinct, the one that will make heads roll if she needs it to. She's tough as nails, but deep down, she has a heart of gold and will do anything to protect those she loves. Morana, I am you, and you are me, sis!๐๐ซก เชโโดDante and Amara Not much to say about them, but I just know they are going to make a sweet couple I can't wait to read their book ๐๐ เชโโดThe way RuNyx built up the tension between Tristan Caine and Morana Vitalio is what kept me glued to the edge of my seat. They were a match made in hell. fire and ice, water and sun, but together they were everything. I love the connection between them, especially given their different backgrounds. เชโโดThose two spicy scenes left me watering ngl๐ฅ๐ฅต๐ฅต. Like, I don't even know what to say. The way RuNyx wrote them had me clutching my pillow in a death grip, my toes practically doing the tango, even my eyes weren't cooperating, doing this weird 360-degree turn like I was possessed or something. no amount of smut could have satisfied me like those two scenes did. Yeah........ it was really that good. ๐คญ๐ฎโ๐จ๐คค โฆโฆ๏ผ๏ผ There was no communication between Tristan and Morana, just a bunch of staring. As much as I loved the tension between them, the constant staring at each other was a bit too much and creepy. At first, I didnโt mind, but it came to a point where I felt like I wanted to be in the book, get in between them, and spray bleach with pepper in both of their eyes so they can stop doing that lol. โฆโฆ๏ผ๏ผ The writing could have definitely been better; that was one of the biggest factors that was really taking my enjoyment from the book and the reason why it was not a 5-star rating. It was giving Wattpad vibe. It was really cringy and confusing at times. There was some weird and awkward phrasing that kept taking me out of the story. such a shame because the plot itself was quite interesting, but I couldn't shake off my annoyance at the writing style. It just didn't do justice to the engaging characters and juicy plotline. โฆโฆ๏ผ. I don't mind 3rd person pov but I really really wish this book had been written in first person perspective๐ฅบ. I'm not a big fan of third person POV because I feel like it disconnects me from the characters. When I'm reading first person, I feel like I'm living through the experiences of the protagonist instead of just a passive observer. Plus, it gives me a chance to get inside the character's head and really understand their thoughts and feelings. so yeah I was still able to feel that spark with 3rd Pov but still wished it was 1-person Pov. โฆโฆ๏ผ.There were way too many repetitive descriptions in the book. I mean, I get it, the author wanted to emphasize the characters' features, but it got really tiring seeing the same descriptions over and over again. The eyes were the biggest culprit - I must have read the description of those blue eyes a million times and don't even get me started on that 'whiskey and sin' voice. I had no idea what the author was trying to convey with that ๐ ๐๐ ๏ผด๏ฝ๏ฝ๏ฝ ๏ผฅ๏ฝ๏ฝ๏ฝ๏ฝ๏ฝ๏ผ๏ผ๏ผ๐ เชโโดThat kiss in the rain at the end of the book was just nothing but PERFECTION!!. all the pent-up tension and attraction between Tristen and Morana finally boiled over in one passionate moment. The rain was the perfect backdrop to set the mood, and it added an extra layer of intensity and emotion to the scene that left me swooning and feeling all warm and fuzzy inside. I'm honestly tempted to reread that scene just to experience the magic all over again. Such a beautiful way to end the book. ๐ฅน๐ ๐ฉ๐ค๐ เชโโดOverall the book was still enjoyable, and I appreciated its balance of dark romance elements and lighter aspects because dark romance is not really my go to subgenre but this one was really good. The author did a good job of incorporating just the right amount of darkness without going overboard with the violence, angst, or excessive smut. I would definitely recommend this book to anyone who's looking for a light mafia dark romance with crime mystery and suspense, as it has all the elements that make it a thrilling read. While it may not be perfect, it's still a satisfying and entertaining read that will keep you hooked.I was drooling and panting like a damn dog . My heart went from zero to sixty in the blink of an eye, and I was utterly obsessed from that moment on. This book owned me, and I was more than happy to bend my ass and submit.๐๐
เชโโด My complaints๐ถโ๐ซ๏ธ๐๐
- 4-stars-books dark-romance mafia-romance
Arini
857 reviews2,059 followers
2.75 stars lol (mostly) all they did was stare at each other, and you call that a romance?!?!? ugh, puh-leasseee. was it why it was called โThe Predatorโ - cause they ALWAYS followed each other with their eyes, sometimes they barked, and a couple times they actually bit (read: f*cked)??? im mostly annoyed by the lack of dialogues. they came few and far between with long narratives that were mostly overwrought with grammatical errors, misspellings, and repetitive descriptions. i get that the author was trying to build suspense and tension. it worked the first few times. but if she hadnt done it through bad writing, i wouldnt have felt compelled to skip - which i ultimately did. the mystery was intriguing, and some of the actions were epic. but the romance was lackluster, and the sex was... *crickets* this guyโs default mode was silent - even when he was doing the nasty. only it wasnt nasty at all bcs there was no dirty talk and no touching - apart from their connecting โchannelsโ. idk if i want to read the next book, but theres a small part of me thats also curious to know more.
Sabrina
143 reviews653 followers
If tension could cut? It would bleed tristan and morana because I could never maintain the intense eye contact that was going on between them lol I was entirely hooked on everything that added to the plot here when it came to the romance, crime, mystery and action. Even in the middle, where the changing dynamic of the characters was emphasized on. I should add how Iโm not a fan of third POV or long chapters but i didnโt mind it here if you like a brooding enigmatic mmc, whose actions speak louder than their words, with blue eyes and whose voice is said to be of whiskey and sin (as morana likes to say), then โTristan is your man. his sense of resistance yet vulnerability was notable through said actions. Heโs for sure down bad for Morana but he was limited in being able to express that morana and her moments of defiance with Tristan and anyone (though reckless at times), assertiveness, and how genuine and valid her worries and doubts felt about everything, all contributed to my enjoyment of her character arc. Some things were repeated a few times, however it didnโt bother me having already known. the author also stresses this early on and attributes it to her high IQ. tristan & morana these two had almost little dialogue and far too many gazes, but I fully understood how that spoke for them. their moments of searing tension and angst were actively felt with this sense of animosity yet the lines were blurred, and I ATE THAT UP ๐ฎโ๐จ I thought they matched each otherโs energy in the masks they wore to ensure their survivalโuntil it started to slowly slip. I canโt wait to see their relationship develop further ๐ฉ dante & amara i need to know more about both of them. Amara seemed like the kindest soul and I liked the possibility of her and morana being friends ๐ฅบ I also felt the allure with Dante with how protective him and Tristan are. tristanโs reason was a surprise, even though I was right about certain connections. That moment at the end in the rain was everything. omg. needless to say, I see the potential of this being an addictive series for me. I could see why some love and arenโt fond of this as it isnโt without its faults, but I personally was soo invested in the characters and their stories. it was something different that I needed and I canโt wait for more. Some quotes โOne day, I am going to carve your heart out and keep it as a souvenir. I promise.โ โIn that moment, the enemy had done what no one had ever even tried to do for her. He had made her feel a little less lonely.โ โI warned you not to think, for one second, that you know me." โAnd I warned you not to think, for one second, that you scare me," she reminded him in the same whisper.โ "I don't know whether to snap your neck or f*ck the life out of you," ๐ซ โNo one gets to kill you Ms.Vitalio. The last face you see before you die will be mine. When it comes to death, youโre mine.โ โTristan Caine terrified her, but it wasn't because of the death he was bringing her slowly, the death he would bring her one day, the death he raised in her. No. It was the life.โ โThatโs why I donโt believe he can truly ever hurt you. Because after tasting life, you donโt really ever let it go, do you?โ โHe felt so deeply, he didnโt let himself feel. He felt so deeply he feared his own reactions to it.โ โTristan Caine: Apparently, you're not out of my system, Ms. Vitalio.โโDon't you know not to run away from predators, sweetheart? We like the hunt."
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itโs about time I started this so letโs goo
Yana
83 reviews5,785 followers
5 โญ๏ธ I AM ABOUT TO DEVOUR THE REST OF THE SERIES BEFORE YOU CAN EVEN BLINK ๐๐ผโโ๏ธthis unlocked a new era
Paige (semi-hiatus)
150 reviews978 followers
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4 stars Enemies to lovers and they are actually enemies? SOLD. This was such a fun read, it's been awhile since I enjoyed a mafia series despite me loving them, it's really hard to find one that isn't overdone. Every time my feminism goes out the window for a morally grey man๐งโโ๏ธ Morana Vitalio is a strong heroine. I loved that the author gave her a fiery strong personality and didn't make her like every other docile mafia princess. She's a coder and she is constantly doing badass things she shouldn't be. She answers to no one. Tristan Cane... where do I begin and how do I get him stalking me outside my window? The ending took my by surprise and I loved the cliffhanger. I'm curious how there story will continue in the next book. I will definitely be continuing the series because it seems it will only improve. Overall I was unsure about this at the start as it's a slow burn, for a relatively short book, however, I'm glad their story is written over two books so it didn't feel rushed. The writing is okay, a little repetitive at times but the tension and chemistry is what made this book an exciting read. This had an interesting plot that kept my attention and I didn't find it overly predictable. While there was some spicy/steamy scenes, it's didn't consume the whole book (probably 3 scenes max) and there was a lot more offered by this book than just smut which appealed to me. I can't wait to continue and see more about Amara and Dante, because that woman is an angel and deserves the world and Dante is a snack ๐ฉ๐
Thanks my love giuls for buddy reading this with me, I had sm fun ๐ Quotes โOne day, I'm going to carve your heart out and keep it as a souvenir. I promise.โ โDeath isn't the main course, sweetheart. It's the dessert. Never make the mistake of thinking you know me. It might just prove to be your last.โ โNo one else gets to kill you, Ms Vitalio. The last face you see before you die will be mine. When it comes to death, you're mine.โ โWe've been honest so far, Ms Vitalio, I'll be honest now. I despise you but I want you. f*ck it, I do. And I want you out of my system.โ โI'm a territorial man. And this has been mine since the moment you locked that bathroom door.โโIn that moment, the man who'd claimed her death had given her a glimpse of life by doing something he probably didn't even realize he'd done.โ
โShe'd been raised around sharks. And she'd learned not to bleed.โ
taking applications. I'm not sure if he's really that hot or I just like him because he hardly speaks? ๐คญ No but seriously, he's super sexy and the chemistry and tension between these two was consuming every page. The shower scene?! don't even get me started ๐ฎโ๐จ I loved learning about his backstory and I'm interested to see this elaborated in the following book. I'm hoping we see his POV more as it was lacking in this book.โDon't you know not to run away from predators, sweetheart? We like the hunt.โ
"You assume I have a heart, wildcat.โ
โNever make the mistake of thinking you scare me. โIt might be your last.โ
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I'm in the market for a new mafia book boyfriend ๐ br with my boo giuls ๐โจ
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โkaramelโ (semi-hiatus)
134 reviews265 followers
โWe've been honest so far, Ms. Vitalio. I'll be honest now. I despise you but I want you. f*ck it, I do. And I want you out of my system.โ 4 ๐โs โฆ๏ธplaylistโฆ๏ธ โฆ๏ธtropesโฆ๏ธ โช๏ธmafia aesthetic โฆ๏ธplotโฆ๏ธ the story is told from two viewpoints, Morona Vitalio and Tristan Cain โthe predatorโ. Morona is a computer expert that creates codes so when her codes are stolen she goes on a mission to find them which leads her to Tristan and his โgroup"---- Dante and Amara. With Tristan being framed, Morona decides to put her hatred aside and help him which leads to an unexpected romance. โฆ๏ธmy thoughtsโฆ๏ธ the highly requested review that everyone has been waiting for is here!! yes ik one dark window got more results than this but I have to find my copy for that review so I thought why not finish up my predator review for everyone who asked for it, so here you are lovelies ๐ I have to say I was probably the last person on the planet to read this book! and it definitely delivered i was in awe i love the characters the plot the enemies to lovers romance ALL OF IT! im not usually into calm mafia romances but this was just chefs kiss and I feel like they just kept everything short and sweet!! โฆ๏ธwritingโฆ๏ธ I loved how straight to the point everything was. I hate when books take like five chapters to describe one minor plot. and I'm not usually a backstories type of person but the backstories made sense and they didn't confuse me at all bc I've read somewhere they try to do backstories for present events and it's a whole mess! so I will say ruynx you did good ๐ค โฆ๏ธcharactersโฆ๏ธ โคmoronaโค absolute queen fr! finally they're giving females more agencyโฆeventho they like to call it โguy jobsโ which is stupid bc there is no reason for a job to be considered a male job! but here she is defying all the odds by being the computer hacking queen!!!๐๐ I love how she isn't scared of tristan. girl is acting like she's immune to his charms eventhk girl u and I both know u like him ๐คญ โคtristan aka โthe predatorโโค he's giving selwyn kane from the โLegendborn seriesโ ๐คญ at first I didn't like him bc of how annoying he was. he was so closed off and so quiet it was also kinda giving aaron warner vibes whenever kenji was talking to him ๐ but once bro opened up to morona and morona only I was a goner, in love, obsessed, all of the above! ๐ โคdanteโค he is so fine like im definitely obsessed! I loved his friendship with morona. and whatever was happening with him and amara at the time had me glued to my seat I was there for any crumbs about their romance. and tho u could never tell that dante and tristan are close (probably bc tristan is just being tristan) i could see the โbrotherly bondโ โค โคamaraโค lowkey love morona but Amara became my favorite the moment they mentioned her! she was giving aoife molloy vibes from the boys of tommen series and I was here for it! ๐ฅฐ dante is a lucky man!! โฆ๏ธbest couple momentsโฆ๏ธ โคHE COOKS! โคtristan arranging for her to have her car fixed โคhis voice of whiskey and sin โคhe beat up her father for her โคthe masterโฆ. scene w/him watching โคthem riding the motorcycle โฆ๏ธromanceโฆ๏ธ 2.5/5 ๐ฅ only bc I felt like this was meant to be more of an introduction to the series with the main characters and not as focused on the romance but I could definitely dense it there! the smut was okay i did LOVE how honest tristan was ๐คญ did i say that with a little too much enthusiasm probably but atp all the men in the series are fine so why tf not?! โฆ๏ธfavorite quotes & scenesโฆ๏ธ โคโThere are places on your body that I know. Places you don't know. Places where I can shoot and harm and you won't die. Death isn't the main course,sweetheart. It's dessert.โ (tristan) โคโNever make the mistake of thinking you scare me. It will be your last.โ (morona) โคโWe've been honest so far, Ms. Vitalio. I'll be honest now. I despise you but I want you. f*ck it, I do. And I want you out of my system.โ(tristan) โคโNext time i'm gonna see how loud you can scream, Ms. Vitalio. I'm gonna make you so sore you won't know if its from the screaming or f*cking.โ (tristan) โคโI don't know whether to snap your neck or f*ck the life out of you.โ (Tristan) โคโThis body belongs to me, Ms. Vitalio.โ โคโI get my mouth on you, you'll never be the same.โ (Tristan)
โฐโค scatterbrain by emei
โฐโค radioactive by imagine dragons
โฐโค counting stars by OneRepublic
โฐโค in your eyes by the weekend
โช๏ธenemies to lovers
โช๏ธi will kill anyone who tries to harm her
โช๏ธi will hunt you down to the ends of the earth
I was definitely more curious about his backstory too and his connection to morona and I will say โthe reaperโ definitely didn't disappoint! ALSO BRO COOKS!!! I WANTED TO GET SUCKED INTO THE BOOK RIGHT THEN AND THERE LIKE BRO COOKS!!! if that isn't the selling point idk what is! and yes how could I not mentioned the voice of โwhiskey and sinโ which is actually what took off a star for me bc I can only handle them repeating something so many times before I get annoyed and want to rip the page out ๐
โฐโโคmentioned 1x before it got annoying)
โฐโโค don't u just love how honest he is ๐คญ
โฐโโค she said he made her want to lay back on the counter (but like girl u and me both ๐)
โThis body is mine.โ
โI'm a territorial man. And this has been mine since the moment you locked the bathroom door.โ
โThat was one time.โ
โThen let's make it a second, shall we?โ
โคTristan: I think my guards are afraid of you.
Morona: They should be. After all, I just blew up a car and killed two men in cold blood.
โฐโโค their phone convos ๐
โฆ๏ธlast thoughtsโฆ๏ธ
yall weren't lying about this series! I was already ready for dante and amara's book! but getting to read another book with morona and tristan had me giggling and kicking my feet bc they are just goals!!! โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ
siff โก
127 reviews1,062 followers
#2 read - october 2023 โต 4 stars this series just has a special place in my heart istg, i honestly think itโs my comfort dark romance series ! iโll never get over it, and iโm still impatiently waiting for 6th book to come out, and it feels like forever. i love every single mc character in this series, and TRUST me thatโs hard to find. well obviously i have my favourites which is; dante and amara from the third book, my precious babies <3 but i wonโt lie, tristan and moranaโs story is just absolutely amazing. this book is mostly an into to the whole world, some of the characters, etc. tristan and moranaโs story will continue in โthe reaperโ the second book. okay but can i just say i forgot the major plot twist in the end, how tf could i forget that ? yโall shouldโve seen my face lmao. ! now that weโre already talking about the plots in this series tristan caine can we just appreciate morana and tristanโs first interaction ? iโll never get over that. their first interaction fits perfectly to their characters, and i absolutely love it ! plus morana and tristan are so chase atlantic coded omfg, i was listening to my chase atlantic playlist while reading this, and oh my, i would definitely recommend doing that, it was just absolutely perfect. โMind that mouth of yours, wildcat.โ โWe have unfinished business, Ms. Vitalio.โ โDid I hurt you?โ ------ #1 read - april 2023 โต 4 starsโ๐๐ค ๐ค๐ฃ๐ ๐๐ก๐จ๐ ๐๐๐ฉ๐จ ๐ฉ๐ค ๐ ๐๐ก๐ก ๐ฎ๐ค๐ช, ๐๐จ. ๐๐๐ฉ๐๐ก๐๐ค. ๐๐๐ ๐ก๐๐จ๐ฉ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ฎ๐ค๐ช ๐จ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ค๐ง๐ ๐ฎ๐ค๐ช ๐๐๐ ๐ฌ๐๐ก๐ก ๐๐ ๐ข๐๐ฃ๐. ๐๐๐๐ฃ ๐๐ฉ ๐๐ค๐ข๐๐จ ๐ฉ๐ค ๐ฎ๏ฟฝ๏ฟฝ๐ช๐ง ๐๐๐๐ฉ๐, ๐ฎ๐ค๐ชโ๐ง๐ ๐ข๐๐ฃ๐.โ
(iโm not gonna spoil anything dw), but can we just appreciate that all the plots in this series actually PLOTS ! i remember reading it for the first time, with my jaw permanently on the floor throughout this whole series. just trust me on this one, and read it ! if you donโt like this series, itโs because thereโs something wrong with you, iโm kidding y๏ฟฝ๏ฟฝ๏ฟฝall are perfect no matter what, but yk what i mean ;)side note; iโd recommend going into this series blind, without searching anything up about it on ig, tiktok, goodreads etc. and iโd recommend not looking into the other books and only focusing on the book youโre at in the series. it gets you the full experience, which i highly recommend ! that is also why iโm not giving a summary, just read the back of the book, and you should be good <3 characters:
morana vitalio / wildcat
total girlboss. i love moranaโs character so much, sheโs such a f*cking badass istg. at this point i donโt know if i wanna be her, or be with her ! she has attitude, self-respect, independence, intelligence, etc. plus are yโall ready ? she absolutely wiped the floor with tristanโs ass once, itโll never not be iconic istg ! her story is and gets so interesting, itโs like when you think youโve got it all figured out, and then woops gets smacked in the face with a major plot twist. โ๐ ๐๐ค๐ฃโ๐ฉ ๐ฉ๐๐๐ฃ๐ ๐๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ค๐ฃ๐ ๐๐๐ฃ ๐๐๐ฃ๐๐ก๐ ๐ฎ๐ค๐ช. ๐๐ค๐ฉ ๐๐ ๐ฎ๐ค๐ช ๐๐ค๐ฃโ๐ฉ ๐ฌ๐๐ฃ๐ฉ ๐ฉ๐ค ๐๐ ๐๐๐ฃ๐๐ก๐๐.โ
this man doesnโt talk much, but when he does >>> even though iโm a dante girl through and through, thereโs just something about tristan. idk exactly what it is, his character just has this mysterious, traumatized, kinda vibe and it just works for him idk how to explain smh. tristanโs story never fails to make me sob, and itโs not even done yet. honestly tho, i just really wanna give this man a hug ! he deserves some love <3โ๐๐ ๐๐๐ก๐ฉ ๐จ๐ค ๐๐๐๐ฅ๐ก๐ฎ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ฃโ๐ฉ ๐ก๐๐ฉ ๐๐๐ข๐จ๐๐ก๐ ๐๐๐๐ก.โ
โOne day, Iโm going to carve your heart out and keep it as a souvenir. I promise.โ
โYou assume I have a heart, wildcat?โ
โIโm done with the codes.โ
โIโm not talking about the codes.โ
โWhy do you care?โ
โDid I hurt you.โ
rereading cuz i miss dante, so why not just take the whole series again ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ
maya
65 reviews408 followers
breaks into his house and threatens to kill him gf, kisses her in the rain with his gun under her jaw bf
- 2023 badass-fmcs enemies-to-lovers
Yous!
107 reviews804 followers
Ahh this book was so good and i canโt wait to continue the series soon. โ review to come ๐ฅ เฃช ห๐Pre-read แฏแกฃ๐ญฉ My friends have been trying to get me to read this for ages and Iโve heard nothing but good things about it. I donยดt know why it took me so long to pick it up, but Itยดs time to hop on and see if itยดs worth the hype it gets. lets just hope for the best๐ค๐ผ๐ Br with Lulu ๐
Liani โก (semi-hiatus)
50 reviews265 followers
Tristan. Caine. what have you done to me? ๐ you ruined all book boyfriends and dark romance books for me๐ฉ๐ I haven't been the same since I read this book last year. I havenโt found another dark romance that could top this one. You guys have no idea how many times Iโve reread this book and the second one๐๐ โด Tristan Caine? perfection หโบ. เผถ โหโน โด Morana Vitalio? perfection หโบ. เผถ โหโน โด the writing? I was skeptical because itโs in the third person but reading this book turns out to be the best decision ever. Again, perfection หโบ. เผถ โหโน โด the mafia trope? perfection หโบ. เผถ โหโน โด the plot? perfection หโบ. เผถ โหโน โด the side characters? perfection หโบ. เผถ โหโน โด the tension? at the maximum capacity. Boom, perfection หโบ. เผถ โหโน โด enemies to lovers trope? this book has the best enemies to lovers Iโve read. So, perfection หโบ. เผถ โหโน โฅ quotes that had me giggling, screaming, blushing, and kicking my feet ๐ .*โโด โOne day, Iโm going to carve your heart out and keep it as a souvenir. I promise.โ ๐ slayyy queen ๐
๐ผ .*โโด โNo one else gets to kill you, Ms. Vitalio. When it comes to death, youโre mine.โ ๐ค *kicking my feet* .*โโด โWeโve been honest so far, Ms. Vitalio. Iโll be honest now. I despise you but I want you. f*ck it, I do. And I want you out of my system.โ sirrrr๐ .*โโด โTristan Caine had made her safe for both nights that sheโd been in his territory, both times when sheโd been at her most vulnerable. He could have taken advantage. He could have turned her over to her father. He could have simply refused to take her in. But he hadnโt. Heโd sat down with her in silence and watched the rain that first time. Heโd run her a bath and given her clothes and fed her this second time. Heโd gotten her car repaired and refused his own summons to Tenebrae. And heโd punched her father in the face. She didnโt even know who he was anymore. She didnโt know who she was with him.โ โค๏ธโ๐ฉนโค๏ธโ๐ฉน .*โโด โDonโt you know not to run away from predators, sweetheart? We like the hunt.โ ๐ฅ then hunt me, please ๐๐ญ๐คฃ .*โโด โDoesnโt matter. I get my mouth on you, and youโll never be the same.โ ๐ฎโ๐จ such a humble man, right? ๐ .*โโด โSheโd chosen to not betray him to these people. Heโd chosen not to let her die.โ ๐ .*โโด โAs of tonight, her life was his. Heโd given up everything so she could live. Her life was his.โ ๐ค .*โโด โWhere. Is. She?โ ๐ *hyperventilating* ๐ .*โโด โShe needed him to choose her like heโd chosen her years ago. She needed him to choose her- because after the day sheโd had, her father trying to kill her like her life was worthless, she needed him to choose her, not for her life, but herself.โ ๐ญ *crying with her* .*โโด โHe kissed her for long, long moments- as chaste as kisses could be, yet she felt it down to her soul. And then, she felt the cool tip of his gun stroking over her face, the metal kissing her wet skin from temple to jaw.โ โค๏ธโ๐ฅ AHHHH WHAT .*โโด โSheโd wanted something. Heโd given it to her, in a way only he could. Heโd not uttered a word. But heโd made his choice. So had she.โ ๐ญ SCREAMINGGG! he chose her ๐๐ Anyways, Iโm obsessed with this book and this couple as you can see ๐๐
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caitlin
187 reviews831 followers
this could have been so much better, so much more interesting, if it was a bit tragic. think: moana wants to kill triscuit, but she canโt. fate and his possessiveness brings them together and over time, they become close. they fall in love. he doesnโt have weaknesses, except for her. we see her struggle with her emotions and how to reconcile her need for revenge with her new and real love for him. as the reader, we donโt know what she chooses. we assume she chose love, because wouldnโt you? then she shoots him while theyโre asleep in his bed. or maybe, the whole book goes on as it does now: they hate each other, then kind of fall for each other, but his history keeps them on a precipice. she finds out, confronts him about it, and he gets to choose. will he kill her, like heโs always planned, always relied on, or will he move forward, perhaps with her? they stand together in the gloom, the rain drops down her face and he kisses her for the first time, caressing her face with the loaded gun. the tension and indecision is palpable, then boom- she crumples forward into his arms before falling to the floor a corpse. of course, that doesnโt happen. no, theyโre too busy being kind of in love and definitely in lust but not happy and never communicative enough to have any dimensionality. anyways, the writing is uninteresting, kind of confusing, EXTREMELY REPETITIVE (no, her apparent โgenius iqโ is not an excuse for that WHEN IT ISNT EVEN FIRST PERSON), and thereโs so little dialogue (because theyโre always f*cking staring and breathing at each other) that it often gets boring and feels overly descriptive. not to mention- SHE ISNT EVEN THAT SMART?? I HAVE SEEN 0 EVIDENCE FOR THIS AND AM HAVING AN EXTREMELY HARD TIME BELIEVING HER STATUS AS A CERTIFIED GENIUS. am i going to read the next book? also buddy read with aliki, sorry i left you behind babe!
itโs tragic, itโs confusing and messy and almost ridiculous. her long-harbored vengeance pulled at her new need for love and affection until she was so confused and violence won out like it always does in the end.
he almost had it all, but humans donโt always want to be happy, canโt accept that. heโd grown his resentment from a seedling to a tree that started in hate of her but now only serves to hinder his own efforts at happiness. humans are emotional and rash and triscuit spends the rest of his life trying to sate his anger and understand why he shot her. maybe he becomes a serial killer, wouldnโt that be the most interesting character arc!
moana (morana) is annoying to no end, the perfect example of trying to make a fmc independent and interesting and admirable and absolutely failing.
triscuit (tristan) is slightly less annoying only because he has no personality to begin with except anger, blue eyes, and a voice of whiskey and sin. *please read that in a condescending moira rose impression, because that is how i wrote it*
i am also an unapologetic lover of 3rd person pov, and while this was in third person, it felt overly personal and should have been in first person.
probably.
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Larissa Cambusano
522 reviews
HEEELLLPPP I LOVED THISS AAAHHHHHH THE KNIFE TO THE THROAT VIBES >>>>>>> iโm a changed woman! iโll die when i read the rest!
maria
147 reviews167 followers
เณโโท 2.7 stars I do get the hype for the book and I see why people like it. I did like the plot and I LOVED the characters, I was intrigued by them and their story specifically Amaraโs story. The book is in 3rd person and I donโt really enjoy reading in 3rd person but it was tolerable, what wasnโt tolerable was the amount of descriptions in the book, oh god, I was exhausted of reading that much unnecessary description. For me it felt like descriptions were 96% of the book and then only 4% of dialogue, no one was talking, almost all the scenes between Tristan and Morana were them staring at each other. I had to skim through the last 20% because it was tiring to read all of that. If thereโs one thing that I hate in books itโs when it gets too repetitive, this one was SO repetitive, I get it, Tristan eyes are blue, blue and his voice is like whiskey and sin , donโt need to mention that all the time. I donโt really think Iโm going to read the rest of the books in the series unless it gets betterยฟ? Overall, I loved the characters hated the writing style. If you havenโt read it, donโt pay attention to what I just said and read it.๐๐ป you might like it. ________________________________ pre-read Everyone seems to love this series, Iโm excited to read it!!!
rhea โ (semi-ia)
105 reviews179 followers
4.5 โญ๏ธ alexa, play โthis is the huntโ by ruelle โ๏ธ โ ๏ธ i am actually writing this review from room 143 of the mental asylumโฆ yeah i was brought there since i became delirious after finishing this book ๐ค this book was CRAZY: the plot twists, characters, tensions - everything was MINDBLOWING.. and omfg the tension between tristan & morana?? UNMATCHED. you donโt know enemies-to-lovers until youโve read this book fr ๐ฅฒ lately the enemies-to-lovers trope books have basically been ~2 minutes of rivalry and then they somehow like each other~ or ~not actually enemies~, but this book RLY ENEMIED IN THE ENEMIES-TO-LOVERS. ugh i could cut the tension with a freakin 10 inch knife omfgggg โธโธ ๊ฐ CHARACTERS โ๏ธใโโน โช๏ธ โช๏ธ โธโธ ๊ฐ FINAL THOUGHTS โ๏ธใโโน โธโธ ๊ฐ FAVORITE QUOTES โ๏ธใโโน โi see how he looks at you. despite knowing about you all my life, i never thought he'd be as he is with you.โ โno one else gets to kill you, ms. Vitalio. the last face you see before you die will be mine. when it comes to death, you're mine.โ โdon't you know not to run away from predators, sweetheart? we like the hunt.โ
++ idc if the author kept repeating tristanโs โwhisky and sinโ aura,, i ate it up regardless๐งโโ๏ธ
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ใยฐห ส โถ โif voices could be drinks, his was a centuries-old vintage whiskey, rolling off the tongue, down the throat, leaving a trail of fire inside, making every cell in the body aware that it had been consumed.โ (ugh i just love how this is written sm omg)
as annie said, โhe can do anything to meโ ,, & i agree. tristan just gimme one chance ๐งโโ๏ธ
i didnโt realize i had a thing for bikers until i read about tristan caine. the way he fights on his bike ohhhhh im so floored for this man ๐ซ โ ugh every word that comes out of this mouth had me on the FLOOR. heโs got such a mysterious + traumatizing vibe to him, i wanna learn more TโT && his past literally BROKE ME 3 i wanna give this man a hugggg :((
โdoesn't matter. i get my mouth on you, and you'll never be the same.โ SIR??? DO U WANNA GET WIFED UP?? (let it be known that if a man irl says this to me, iโm calling security and speeding so far away,, but its ok coming from tristanโs mouth only โ)
ใยฐห ส โถ โshe'd been raised around sharks. and sheโd learned not to bleedโ
i LOVE her character. i havenโt read many mafia-related books but i rly wish all fmcโs are like her bc she was just so AWESOME to read. sheโs independent + extremely fiesty, and she stands her ground & fights. and her attitude >>>> HOT HOT HOTTT ๐ซ๐ i actually respect her sm for holding back with tristan for so long bc,, if i were her, the minute i saw tristan getting on the bike iโd just crumple right there and die. sheโs such a strong soldier ๐ซก๐ซก๐ซก
thereโs not much to dante as of now but OMGGG i canโt wait for his books. i just know iโm gonna adore him smmm TโT and omg amara, sheโs my bsf for LIFE. i respect her smsmmm sheโs gone thru sm but look how tough she is ๐ซก i rly rly hope amara & morana grow even closer in the future books bc i SMELL HOT GIRL FRIENDSHIPPP ๐ค๐ค
can we talk about the KISS SCENE. IN. THE. RAIN. holy cow istg i was literally on the edge of my bed, frantically texting annie โMF THEY HAVENT EVEN KISSED AND ITS THE LAST CHAPTER WTFFโ ughhh i was literally pulling my hair and then. the holy kiss scene happens. that quite literally changed my life. my skin is clear, my hair is glowing, i am a new person now.
โโ โhe devoured her in the rain, with his gun beneath her jaw. he devoured her while tasting like the whiskey and sin she heard in his voice.โ :: THE THINGS THIS QUOTE DOES TO ME ๐๐๐ i am a mess bc of tristanmorana.
+ the only reason i gave this a 4.5 is bc the first couple chapters were a bit slow, but it was just so amazing after chapter 6 ๐ฉ๐ผโ๐ณ๐ i cannot WAITTT to start book 2 ;โ;
she knew he would destroy her, but not today. today, for the first time, she got to be no one but a girl on the back of a man's motorcycle, if even for a moment. today, for the first time, she was just a woman with no past and no future, just this endless road with this man, this freedom, and this life.
โhow is he with me?โ
โalive.โ
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pre-review: GOODBYE THIS WAS SO FREAKIN GOOD,, YALL WERE SO RIGHT AB THIS ๐ฎโ๐จ๐ซ๐ฅฒ๐๐ซ tristanmarano for life u guys โโโ (still settling on the rating omfg aaahhh)
rtc~~!! (i've got sm to say- ๐คญ๐คญ)
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pre-read: trying out smth new hehe~~
(&& ty annie for recommending this to meee <33)
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EmBibliophile
614 reviews1,901 followers
This series is going to be my newest obsession. I can feel it!! I enjoyed this one so much and I was so invested in the story. From the full of action plot. To Tristan who was and I quote; โA walking, talking Mission Impossible, that's what he was.โ I just really really liked him. He definitely goes to the list of my -favourite toxic book boyfriends I never want to meet in real life- (or maybe I do?). He rides a motorcycle better than any one I know. He climb walls. When he saw the heroine looking like hell on his door, he prepared a room and a bath without saying a word, left her and then sent a message to check that sheโs okay? Even though heโs only two doors away? You donโt know how much giving her space meant to me! It might show that he didnโt care enough, but I disagree!!! And many many perfect scenes more. I like him, okay? I just do! I like Morana as well; her smart mouth, her genuineness, and how she stood her ground. For such a genius, she kinda made a lot of stupid decisions tho. That even I know they were stupid. Those two definitely gave me power couple vibes and the sexual tension was so freaking crazy!! And their chemistry was just so freaking explosive. I have a tiny problem with the amount of staring they did tho. No couple stare at each other that much! There were a lot of scenes with them making eye contact and just staring at each other that at some point I was like, are we done?? The inner monologues were kinda long and too much as well. But overall I really enjoyed this. The last chapter was so good that Iโm jumping into the next book immediately! #1 The Predator - 4.25 stars Song recommendation: 'Apparently, you're not out of my system, Ms. Vitalio.'
#2 The Reaper - 4.5 stars
#3 The Emperor - 4.5 stars
Secrets and lies by Ruelle
Like that by Bea Miller
Bravado by Lorde
- 4-stars
Nyx93
18 reviews8 followers
If I have to read one more time about magnificent, or firce blue eyes I'll burn the book. She wrote about main character blue eyes over 70 times in the book. Just enough already. This was so painful to read..
- 2020 romance
annie
120 reviews566 followers
dnf @ 47% somehow i managed to accidentally delete my whole ass review on this book, so this is a rewritten version. anyway, this book already had me on the verge of tears, because of how bad it was.it was my first and apparently last mafia books, cause if the other ones like alike this, i donโt want it, thanks. letโs start. first of all, the writing style. that was a f*cking fire, guys. the amount of mentions of โhis blue eyesโ, โour gazes lockedโ and โhe stares at herโ caused me 5 years of my life minimum. exhibition A: exhibition B: exhibition C: exhibition D: i understood even from the first sentence that theyโre not blind. iโm not an optometrist, i donโt give a single f*ck about your eyes. youโre not mute, therefore you can speak. so why then i feel like i was watching โanimal planetโ?? and someone really should buy a dictionary for the author as a birthday present, because how can be otherwise explained, that the word combination โTristan Caineโ was mentioned 228 times? and when it wasnโt that, it would be โheโ the whole goddamn chapter. i thought that everyone have to attend middle school, but apparently itโs not necessary? can someone explain how we got to the point, where the books to publish donโt even have to have a basic editing? how this even went past the drafts? iโm not reading a fanfic on wattpad, where people are beginners. now, the romance aspect๐. when morana(h) and tristanโs(H) relationship didnโt consisted of the threats to kill each other and staring contest, they had dialogues like this one: people who recommend this sh*t to anyone deserve jail. and i havenโt even got to their first sex scene, guys. that was a real bomb. was that supposed to make me hot and turn on? anyway, what do you think? after all this โangstโ and โtensionโ there must be super sexy and steamy sex scene, where tristan worships morana and her golden puss*. haha WRONG. their first sex aka quickie was in the public bathroom in the restaurant with their enemies and moronโs father in it. oh, and have i already mentioned, that tristan was mute the whole time? like literally. whoโs here was complaining about bad dirty talk? what about no dirty talk at all? dear runyx, iโm not reading your whole ass fanfic for finally reach the smut scene and find out that the guy not only bad at dirty talk, but in speaking overall?? iโm not asking him to retell the whole โwar and peaceโ during sex, but maybe he at least can moan to let the heroine know, that he didnโt fall asleep while they were banging?? and right after that mind-blowing scene, tristan mf caine gave out this: gosh, if you havenโt already understood what a cheesy piece of sh*t this book is, i have more examples: im dying right here. but what was my last straw is moranaโs inner monologue. when will authors understand, that their terrible, ugly, absolutely hideous pseudo-poetic writing doesnโt attract absolutely no one? in fact, that wasnโt even the worst one. and the author is describing morana as the smartest woman on earth and technology genius? this bitch is dumb as f*ck. the first scene in this book started with her, wanting to kill tristan in his apartment. she was alone with a knife. eventually she failed and it was tristan threating her with her knife. the thinking process of a genius is right here. bullsh*t bruhhhhโTristan Caine: Apparently, you're not out of my system, Ms. Vitalio.โ
And he turned his neck, his blue eyes locking with hers.
She could feel eyes on her. His eyes. Hungry eyes.
But she felt those eyes caress every inch of her exposed back, felt her nape prickle in awareness as her body buzzed with sensation, imagining him, sitting somewhere, devouring her with those blue, blue eyes.
But she could feel that stare on her back, zinging across her skin.
And it did puke out a truckload of information at her, mainly IP addresses that did not belong to Tristan Caine, as they'd been framed to look like. Either Tristan Caine happened to be one brilliant Machiavellian
"My mother loved the rain."
A pause.
"I thought you had a mother."
A familiar knot constricted her throat.
"I don't anymore.โ "We've been honest so far, Ms. Vitalio," he murmured. "I'll be honest now. I despise you but I want you. f*ck it, I do. And I want you out of my system.โ
"Not as experienced as you wanted me to believe, Ms. Vitalio,โ
"Tristan doesn't allow people into his space. Everyone who knows him knows that." Morana blinked, still reeling from questions about the incredibly baffling man.
"Then why did he let me, of all people, stay here?" Why had he insisted that she stay? Why had he growled like that when Dante had been ready to offer her his apartment? Thunder crackled in the sky, a split of lightening bathing everything in brilliant white before disappearing. Droplets hit the glass in tandem, trying to break it like bullets, trying to reach her but unable to. She sat behind that wall, longing to feel those droplets on herself, longing to let them sear her, but unable to. And wasn't that her life. Longing for things she couldn't reach, things that tried to reach her and came up against a wall. A glass wall. Where she could see everything, know exactly what she was missing, drown in her awareness even as the glass couldn't break. Because just as it did now, breaking the glass meant death.
Gry โพ
98 reviews154 followers
2.5 โ
's A part of me can understand the hype this book has gotten. However, the writing took it down so many notches for me. โน๏ธ Another, although smaller, irk I had was that this whole thing started with recovering codes written by Morona. However, we never got to know what the codes did, just their potential impact of mobwar and death. It unfortunately made that whole plot and Morana being the smartest girlie alive feel so unserious to me. This all said, I will be starting book two right away. Even though all the previously mentioned issues I had with this, I managed to enjoy it. This is mainly attributed to the tension between Tristan & Morana, as well as the budding friendship between Amara and Morana. I am so eager to see how the love between them all will grow in upcoming books. I wouldn't complain to see more of Dante either, I love myself a brown eyed man. ๐คญ This is my first RuNyx. I'm simultaneously excited and somewhat terrified.
Ok besties, I feel a bit divided.
Dark romance, lots of tension, secrets and underlying mystery, protective men, mafia and an overall interesting plot.
I can overlook singular misspellings or grammatical errors, but this was a bit much.
It's everything from simple misspellings, to things not adding up in the plot, to the writing just being repetitive af. There is no way in hell this ever went by an editor. It's so unfortunate since the characters and plot would actually be enjoyable otherwise.
If this was written in first person pov, with some chapters from Tristans pov and an editor on top of that I think I've easily could've rated this 4-5 stars.
I am fairly certain I have figured out the underlying mystery, but I am intrigued to read the rest to see if I am right and if so, how that will unfold. For my mental wellbeing the writing better improve from here on out though, can somebody confirm? ๐ฅฒ
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โpre-read:โ
Crossing my fingers this is good, bc I am desperate for something to stimulate my brain rn ๐โโ๏ธ
buket
826 reviews1,211 followers
guys do you think i can take Morana in a fight? because i ~~~~need want her man
reading this series for my pookie wookie <3 i hope itโs good because i feel like our friendship depends on me loving this๐๐ผ๐งธ
- likeable-heroine not-so-sweet
หโง*โโท สแดแดแดส (Levi Ackerman's wife)
219 reviews775 followers
Tristan: ๐งฟ๐๐งฟ Morana: ๐๐๐ Author: "Her heart pounded in the silence, as she stayed unmoving, barely breathing, nerves stretching tighter and tighter with every single breath, her nipples hardening under the constraining fabric of her bra, heat pooling between her legs. Good lord, she was ready to combust just by his stare alone." We'll talk when Tristan Cane develops a hobby other than having blue eyes and a voice of whiskey and sin.
And when Morana's entire personality is not simply getting horny by Tristan's glares.
- adult-and-eroticas dark-romance enemies-to-lovers